This is a critique of a landing page for an app called Honeyfi.
It’s really long right now and not at all what I was envisioning.
However, in an effort to show my own growing and learning process, I’ve decided to post it anyway. I will follow it up with an updated, cut-in-half version that can be used to compare and contrast my first draft with the final product.
I’d love any and all feedback on this—specifically tips and tricks for not saying so many filler words and for staying on track of what I’m even talking about. Thank you in advance, kind and helpful people. Be blessed.